from an interested observer

This is all well written little one, but I fear only a few will read it because it looks like a big grey block.

Might I suggest an extra space between the paragraphs. This helps the eye to scan lines more easily and reduces the task of reading.

You have a talent for the language and it would be a shame if you went unread because of a matter of presentation.

You do understand that you will need to visit us in Tel'Ruid before you will be considered for membership don't you? I look forward to seeing you in the Glade. When you are ready, post here and I will come and lead you to us.

Lissenen ar' maska' la'laith tenna lye omentuva, mellon.

a shadow in the woods

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> This is all well written little one, but I fear only a few will read it because it looks like a big grey block. > Might I suggest an extra space between the paragraphs. This helps the eye to scan lines more easily and reduces the task of reading. > You have a talent for the language and it would be a shame if you went unread because of a matter of presentation. > You do understand that you will need to visit us in Tel'Ruid before you will be considered for membership don't you? I look forward to seeing you in the Glade. When you are ready, post here and I will come and lead you to us. > Lissenen ar' maska' la'laith tenna lye omentuva, mellon. > > a shadow in the woods >
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