for responding so late, I'll keep your opinion in mind and I'l try to work to it. It will take a while i'm afraid, since I still have to chase a few demons out of my head (ooc I'm still a bit confused and stressed out)and then I'll write one. but I ask your help, the second the story gets boring, tell me and I'll change it...please? If you have some spare time of course.

Honestly said I don't like stories that start with 'I'.

Thanks for your opinion and fair winds...
Isilheledh