Re: my life


| Responses | Post Response | The Silver Arrow Tavern | FAQ |

Posted by The Grammarian on Nenime 19, 2003 at 04:04:09 pm

In Reply to: Re: my life posted by Where is the Grammarian? NT on Nenime 19, 2003 at 02:43:56 pm

Good Lord, your spelling is atrocious! Here, let me correct your mistakes.

"My [capitalize the first letter of the beginning word in a sentence] life is very hard to understand as I [always capitalize the word "I"] have many lives. [Punctuation marks, periods for example, are your friends.] I [again, always capitalize "I"] live happy, [commas help us to read your thoughts] I [again, capitalize "I"] live say [Huh? I assume you mean "sad"] and sorrow for my life is and never will be love, [again, commas] for I [capitalize "I"] swore [the past tense of "swear" is "swore," not "sware"] I [again, capitalize "I"] will stay an [use "a" as an indefinite article for words that start with a consonant, "an" for those that start with a vowel] elf and become a leader one day, [again, commas] and write stories about the brave elves of Rivendell [this is how you spell the name of Elrond's home] as I [again, "I"] write I [again, "I"] will fight and win! Email me. [Always capitalize the beginning word in a sentence; always put two spaces between the end of one sentence and the beginning of another; use punctuation.]"

There.


Responses:
Post A Response
Name:
E-Mail:
Subject:
Response:
Optional Link URL:
Link Title:
Optional Image URL:

15647


Send comments and questions to the [email protected].